自行车— Part 1 评分报告

练习Part12026-10-23 18:13:42

对话

Part 1

考官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

考生

Uh, no, I don't have any bike.

考官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

考生

Yes, bike is popular in my country and specially among the young youngsters. Uh, but I don't have any interest in bikes, but in my country it's very popular.

评估

总分

总分: 5.0流畅度与连贯性: 5.0发音: 5.0语法: 5.0词汇: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

分数: 45.0

建议: Answer in the past tense because the question is about your childhood. Use “a bike” rather than “any bike” in this negative statement. Add one brief detail, such as why you did not have one or what you used instead.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived near my school, so I usually walked there.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

分数: 50.0

建议: Use the plural “bikes” when speaking generally, and say “especially,” not “specially.” Avoid the repetition in “young youngsters” and the repeated contrast with “but.” Give a specific reason or example to support your opinion, and use a linking phrase such as “for example.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. For example, many students ride them to school because they’re affordable and convenient. I’m not particularly interested in cycling myself, though.

语法

Past tense issue (ID 5)

× Uh, no, I don't have any bike.

✓ Uh, no, I didn't have any bikes.

The question asks about your childhood, so the answer should use the past tense. Use didn't have rather than don't have. In this negative sentence, bikes is also the more natural plural form after any.

Singular and plural issue (ID 1)

× Yes, bike is popular in my country and specially among the young youngsters. Uh, but I don't have any interest in bikes, but in my country it's very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among the young youngsters. Uh, but I don't have any interest in bikes, but they are very popular in my country.

When referring to bikes as a general category, use the plural noun bikes. The verb must agree with that plural subject, so use are, and the pronoun referring back to bikes should be they rather than it.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (ID 13)

× Yes, bike is popular in my country and specially among the young youngsters. Uh, but I don't have any interest in bikes, but in my country it's very popular.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country, especially among the young youngsters. Uh, but I don't have any interest in bikes, but they are very popular in my country.

Use especially to mean particularly or to emphasize that bikes are popular among a specific group. Specially usually means for a particular purpose, so it does not fit this meaning.

重点词汇

Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
Young— Youthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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