自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly and use the natural phrase “have a bike” or “ride a bike,” rather than “drive bike.” Use the past tense to describe your childhood, and add one specific detail, such as when you got the bike or where you rode it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: State your opinion clearly, using “a popular means of transportation” or “a popular way to get around.” Avoid the vague phrase “here and there,” and correct the grammar: say “students use bikes to go to school” and “workers ride bikes to work.” Organize your examples with a linking phrase such as “for example,” and remove the hesitation “Uh.”

示例: Yes, bikes are a popular way to get around in my country, especially in busy towns. For example, many students ride them to school, while some workers use them to commute because they are affordable and convenient.

× Yes, I drove bike since childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a period in the past, so use the past-tense phrase had a bike when I was a child. Since childhood usually suggests a period continuing up to the present and does not fit this past-time question.

× Yes, I drove bike since childhood.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article such as a. Say a bike, not bike.

× Yes, bikes are popular mean of transportation in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are a popular means of transportation in my country.

The standard expression is a means of transportation. Means has this form when used as a singular noun in this expression.

× Yes, bikes are popular mean of transportation in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are a popular means of transportation in my country.

The singular noun phrase needs the article a before popular means. Use a popular means of transportation.

× Uh, people normally use bikes to go here and there for some school students use bike to go school and some workers going on bike.

✓ People normally use bikes to get around. Some students use bikes to go to school, and some workers go to work by bike.

For does not correctly connect these ideas. Separate the ideas into sentences or connect them with a suitable conjunction, such as and. Avoid joining complete clauses with an incorrect conjunction.

× Uh, people normally use bikes to go here and there for some school students use bike to go school and some workers going on bike.

✓ People normally use bikes to get around. Some students use bikes to go to school, and some workers go to work by bike.

Use the plural bikes when speaking generally about bicycles. The sentence refers to bikes as a type of transportation, not to one specific bike.

× Uh, people normally use bikes to go here and there for some school students use bike to go school and some workers going on bike.

✓ People normally use bikes to get around. Some students use bikes to go to school, and some workers go to work by bike.

The usual expression is go to school, with to before school. To describe transportation, use by bike rather than on bike.

× Uh, people normally use bikes to go here and there for some school students use bike to go school and some workers going on bike.

✓ People normally use bikes to get around. Some students use bikes to go to school, and some workers go to work by bike.

The sentence describes a general habit, so use the simple present. The clause about workers needs a finite verb: workers go, not workers going.