自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: ตอบตรงคำถามได้แล้ว แต่ประโยคยังไม่สมบูรณ์ เพราะควรระบุสิ่งที่ไม่มีให้ชัดเจน เช่น “a bike” และอาจเพิ่มรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เพื่อขยายคำตอบให้เป็นธรรมชาติ ใช้ไม่เกิน 2–3 ประโยค

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school or went places with my parents.

建议: เริ่มต้นตอบว่าไม่คิดว่าจักรยานเป็นที่นิยมได้ แต่เหตุผลยังสื่อไม่ชัดและมีข้อผิดพลาดด้านไวยากรณ์ ควรอธิบายเหตุผลให้เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ถนนไม่ปลอดภัยหรือมีเลนจักรยานไม่เพียงพอ ใช้คำเชื่อมอย่าง “because” และหลีกเลี่ยงคำเติม “uh” เพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหล

示例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Thailand. Many roads can be unsafe for cyclists, and there aren’t enough dedicated bike lanes. As a result, people often prefer to travel by car or motorbike.

× No, I did not have.

✓ No, I did not have one.

The verb have needs an object in this sentence. Use one to refer back to a bike and avoid repeating the noun.

× No, I don't think because uh, in Thailand don't have any rules support to, uh, the vehicle or when uh, they there is biking to safety.

✓ No, I don't think so, because there aren't any rules in Thailand to support cycling or keep people safe when they ride bikes.

The phrase I don't think needs so when it means I disagree or do not believe that bikes are popular. The original sentence also has an incomplete and confusing structure after because. Express the reason as a complete clause, and use clear phrases such as rules to support cycling and keep people safe when they ride bikes.

× No, I don't think because uh, in Thailand don't have any rules support to, uh, the vehicle or when uh, they there is biking to safety.

✓ No, I don't think so, because there aren't any rules in Thailand to support cycling or keep people safe when they ride bikes.

To say that rules do not exist, use the there be construction: there aren't any rules. The original phrase in Thailand don't have has no grammatical subject for don't have.