自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答能提到小时候有自行车，并尝试补充用途，但时态和句子结构错误较多，后半部分难以理解。先直接回答，再按时间顺序补充年龄、上学或出行用途。注意过去的经历使用一般过去时，例如“did have”“rode”；“12 or 13”应表达为“12 or 13 years old”。避免重复和不完整表达，控制在三句左右。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about 12 or 13, while I was in primary school. I often rode it to school or to visit my friends.

建议: 回答立场明确，也给出了骑车上学、上班的原因，但有几处表达不自然：“choose ride”应为“choose to ride”；“religion”可能想表达“region”；“they’re often rain”可改为“it often rains”。建议用连接词清楚说明天气与骑车之间的转折，并用一个具体细节支撑观点。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to school or work because they’re convenient and inexpensive. Even in my region, where it often rains, some people still cycle for short journeys.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

句子描述的是童年时的经历，时间在过去，因此助动词 do 应改为过去式 did。

× I'm do my primary school maybe and I ride a bike, go to school or go to party or somewhere.

✓ I was probably in primary school, and I rode my bike to school, to a party, or somewhere else.

这句话是在回忆过去，应使用过去时。描述当时的状态用 was，描述骑车和去某处的动作分别用 rode 和 went（此处调整为更自然的平行结构）。

× I'm do my primary school maybe and I ride a bike, go to school or go to party or somewhere.

✓ I was probably in primary school, and I rode my bike to school, to a party, or somewhere else.

party 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应说 a party。注意，to school 前通常不加冠词，因为它表示上学这一活动。

× I run it over days.

✓ I rode it every day.

这句话描述过去经常发生的动作，应使用过去时。ride 的过去式是 rode；表示“每天”通常用 every day，而不是 over days。

× There are many people who choose ride a bike to go to school or go to work.

✓ There are many people who choose to ride a bike to go to school or work.

choose 后面接表示选择做某事的动词不定式，即 choose to do，而不能直接接动词原形 ride。

× Although, uh, in my religion, umm, they're often rain, but it can't stop the persons people.

✓ Although it often rains where I live, the rain can't stop people from riding bikes.

描述经常发生的天气情况应使用一般现在时。英语中表示天气时通常用 it 作主语，并说 it rains；不能说 they're rain。

× Although, uh, in my religion, umm, they're often rain, but it can't stop the persons people.

✓ Although it often rains where I live, the rain can't stop people from riding bikes.

Although 引导让步状语从句时，通常不再用 but 连接主句。原句中的 the persons people 也造成结构重复；可简洁地说 people。