自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，但“bag”应为“bike”；“ride a bag”和“wrote free fluently”也不符合语境，建议说“ride a bike”和“rode confidently”。注意过去时的一致性，如“bought”“taught”“learned”“rode”。可以补充一个具体细节，例如你在哪里学会骑车，或当时的感受。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was five. My dad bought it for me and taught me how to ride in a park near our home. I learned quite quickly, and soon I could ride around on my own.

建议: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“bags”应为“bikes”，“share bags”应为“shared bikes”。“everywhere in streets”可改为“all over the streets”，而“riding bike”应为“riding a bike”或“cycling”。建议用连接词把原因说得更自然，并具体说明骑车方便在哪里，例如短途出行或避开交通拥堵。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially shared bikes. You can see them all over the streets in many cities. They’re convenient for short trips, and people can use them to avoid traffic or get to a nearby subway station.

× I think the reason is riding bike is a really convenient way for people to go.

✓ I think the reason is that riding a bike is a really convenient way for people to get around.

“the reason is”后面需要接一个完整的从句；这里在从句前加“that”，使句子结构清楚。另外，“riding bike”中的单数可数名词“bike”前需要冠词。

× I think the reason is riding bike is a really convenient way for people to go.

✓ I think the reason is that riding a bike is a really convenient way for people to get around.

“bike”是单数可数名词，泛指骑自行车这项活动时，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。可以记住：单数可数名词通常不能单独使用。

× You could see share bags everywhere in streets.

✓ You could see share bags everywhere on the streets.

表示在街道上时，通常用“on the streets”，而不是“in streets”。请记住常见搭配“on the street(s)”。