自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中有相关信息，但开头的 “I have a background with a child” 和 “it's my dead bike” 表达不清楚，可能想说自己小时候有一辆自行车，或那是爸爸的自行车。注意使用过去时，例如 “I had” 和 “I used”，并将 “I very like it” 改为 “I really liked it”。删去意思重复的 “go to school and go home”，补充一处具体细节即可。

示例: Yes, I had a blue bike when I was a child. It was quite big for me, but I really liked it because I rode it to school every day.

建议: 先直接回答自行车是否受欢迎，并注意区分 “bikes” 和 “bags”。回答中断较多，建议使用完整句子，例如 “They are a convenient way to get to work”。最后一句 “we have a lot of back for everyone” 意思不清楚；可以改为具体说明自行车普及的原因，例如城市有许多自行车道或共享单车。使用一两个连接词让理由更连贯。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are a convenient and affordable way to get to work, especially in busy cities. Also, many places have bike lanes and shared bicycles.

× Yes, I have a background with a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike as a child.

问题是在描述童年时用了现在时 have。这里应使用过去时 had。回答这类关于童年经历的问题时，通常用过去时描述当时拥有或做过的事情。

× It was a blue bike, giant bike and it's my dead bike.

✓ It was a blue bike, a giant bike, and it's my dead bike.

giant bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词 a。

× It was a blue bike, giant bike and it's my dead bike.

✓ It was a blue bike, giant bike, and it was my dead bike.

整句话在描述过去的自行车，因此并列部分也应保持过去时。应将 it's 改为 it was。

× For me, I very like it.

✓ I really liked it.

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。表达“非常喜欢”时，可以用 really 修饰动词，或说 like it very much。因为这里谈的是过去的感受，liked 也应使用过去式。

× I used it to go to school and use it to go home.

✓ I used it to go to school and to go home.

句子描述过去使用自行车的情况，两个并列动作应保持一致。原句中的 use 应改为过去时，或像修改句一样省略重复的 used，并保持 to go 的结构平行。

× I would like it.

✓ I liked it.

这里是在回忆过去对自行车的感受，应使用过去时 liked。would like 通常表示现在或将来的愿望，和此处的过去语境不符。

× Yes, bags are popular in my country because it's a. Easy way to. Go to work.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they are an easy way to go to work.

easy 的发音以元音音素开头，因此前面应使用 an，而不是 a。另外，easy way 是可数名词单数，需要冠词。

× We have a lot of back for everyone.

✓ We have a lot of bikes for everyone.

a lot of 后面可以接可数名词复数。这里指许多自行车，应使用 bikes。