自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并注意过去时：用“had”而不是“have”，用“loved”而不是“loves”。“when I was young”和“when I was a child”意思重复，可删去其一。后面的“healthy”重复出现，可以补充一个具体细节，例如你通常在哪里骑车或骑车时做什么。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. It was a fun way to explore the area and get some exercise.

建议: 开头直接回答“Bikes are quite popular”，并避免重复“popular”。注意主谓一致：“bikes”对应“they”，不要说“it’s popular”。“less common”表示“不太常见”，与前面的“popular”矛盾；如果想表达流行，应改为“a common way”。可以举出具体原因或例子，例如城市里的自行车道或共享单车。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities like Suzhou and Shanghai. Many people use them for short journeys because they are convenient and a good way to stay active.

× Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

这里的“when I was young”指过去的时间，因此描述当时拥有自行车应使用一般过去时“had”，而不是现在时“have”。

× Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I loves bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

✓ Yes, I have a bike when I was young and I love bicycling, umm, everywhere, because I think it's interesting and it's healthy.

主语“I”是第一人称单数，谓语动词不应加第三人称单数词尾“-s”。应将“loves”改为“love”。

× Yes, it's popular because everyone in my country, in Suzhou, in Shanghai, they all think riding bicycles, it's popular now and it's umm, it's a less common way to keep fit.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular because people in my country, including those in Suzhou and Shanghai, think that riding bicycles is popular now, and it is a less common way to keep fit.

原句中“think riding bicycles, it's popular now”把两个句子不恰当地用逗号连接，且“think”后面的内容缺少清晰的从句结构。可用“think that...”引出从句，并补上“riding bicycles is popular now”，使句子结构完整、清楚。