自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时：将“have”改为“had”。第二句表达不自然，“The back”无法指代自行车；可以说妈妈买了自行车并把它作为生日礼物送给你。用一两个具体细节补充，例如自行车的颜色或你常骑它去哪里。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought it for me as a birthday present, and it was bright red. I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: 开头先明确回答“自行车在中国很受欢迎”，不需要说“more popular”，除非要和其他交通方式比较。注意使用复数“bikes”，并改正不自然的表达：“go work”应为“go to work”，“take back”意思不清楚，可改为“ride bikes”或“use shared bikes”。建议用连接词组织原因，并具体说明自行车方便、便宜以及容易停放。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. They’re affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. For example, many people ride bikes or use shared bikes to get to work because they’re easy to park.

× When I was a child, I have a bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike.

句子描述的是“小时候”的经历，时间已经过去，因此主句中的动词也应使用过去时。have 的过去式是 had。

× The back was bought by my mom and sent me as a birthday gift.

✓ The bike was bought by my mom and sent to me as a birthday gift.

原句使用被动语态 was bought，但后面的 sent me 结构不正确。表示“把它送给我”时，应说 sent it to me；使用被动语态时则说 was sent to me。这里根据上下文将 back 改为 bike，以明确所指物品。

× Yes, in my country China, the bike is more popular because bike is very convenient and it's cheap and many people take back.

✓ Yes, in China, bikes are popular because they are very convenient and cheap.

这里是在泛指自行车这一类事物，宜用复数 bikes，而不是用单数 bike。相应地，be 动词和代词也要用复数形式 are 和 they。

× Yes, in my country China, the bike is more popular because bike is very convenient and it's cheap and many people take back.

✓ Yes, in China, bikes are popular because they are very convenient and cheap, and many people ride them.

take back 通常需要宾语，原句中的 many people take back 没有说明“拿回什么”，因此句子结构不完整。结合上下文，可以用 many people ride them（许多人骑自行车）表达完整意思。

× Many people go work by bike.

✓ Many people go to work by bike.

表示“去上班”时，通常使用 go to work，work 前需要介词 to。

× It can park easily.

✓ It can be parked easily.

自行车是“被停放”的对象，不是主动去停车的人，因此应使用被动语态。情态动词 can 后的被动结构是 can be + 过去分词，所以应说 can be parked。