自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then explain what you enjoyed about cycling. Use the past tense for childhood experiences ("liked," "could") and say "ride a bike," not "ride by." Avoid repeating the same phrase, and make the contrast with your current habits clear.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it. It made me feel happy, especially when I rode around with my friends. We sometimes cycled to nearby places together. I don't ride a bike much these days.

建议: Give a clear answer and support it with the different reasons people cycle. Use the correct form "like riding" and the phrase "ride bikes." Avoid repeating words, and use a linking phrase such as "For example" or "while" to connect your points.

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many young people ride them for fun or to get around, while older people often cycle to stay active. For example, it's common to see people riding in parks, especially at weekends.

× Yes, of course when I was a child I like to have to ride by because ride by it made me feel happy and I can ride by with my friend to go somewhere that I want. But now I don't like to ride by.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I liked riding a bike because it made me feel happy, and I could ride a bike with my friends to go somewhere I wanted. But now I don't like riding a bike.

The answer describes experiences during childhood, so use past-tense forms such as liked and wanted. The phrase ride by is not the correct expression here; use ride a bike. Use friends if you mean more than one friend.

× Yes, of course when I was a child I like to have to ride by because ride by it made me feel happy and I can ride by with my friend to go somewhere that I want. But now I don't like to ride by.

✓ Yes, of course. When I was a child, I liked riding a bike because it made me feel happy, and I could ride a bike with my friends to go somewhere I wanted. But now I don't like riding a bike.

Use could rather than can to describe an ability in the past. When talking about a past experience, keep the verbs in the clause consistent with the past-time context.

× Many people like ride by us young people ride for ride by for fun and old people ride by for exercising.

✓ Many people like riding bikes. Young people ride bikes for fun, and older people ride bikes for exercise.

After like, use a gerund when choosing the -ing pattern: like riding. The original also has a tangled sentence structure; separate the general statement from the examples. Use ride bikes for fun to express the activity clearly.

× Many people like ride by us young people ride for ride by for fun and old people ride by for exercising.

✓ Many people like riding bikes. Young people ride bikes for fun, and older people ride bikes for exercise.

The original combines several ideas without clear sentence boundaries, making the meaning difficult to follow. State the main idea first, then give the examples in a separate, well-formed sentence.