自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再补充一条具体信息。注意使用正确的表达：用“when I was a child”，而不是“when I was a children”；用“gave me a bike”，而不是“gave for me”。避免重复，并确认礼物的具体场合，确保表达清楚。

示例: Yes, I did. My dad gave me a bike when I was a child, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建议: 观点表达基本清楚，但需要调整语序和语法。可以先回答“是的，很受欢迎”，再说明学生骑车上学。注意说“most students”，而不是“most of students”；并在“ride a bike”和“go to school”之间使用“to”连接。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many students ride their bikes to school because it is convenient and affordable.

× Yes, when I when I was a children my daddy gave for me for a tour to give to me for a bad gift.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, my daddy gave me a bike as a gift.

“a”后面应接单数名词，因此应将“children”改为“child”。“Children”是“child”的复数形式。

× Yes, when I when I was a children my daddy gave for me for a tour to give to me for a bad gift.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, my daddy gave me a bike as a gift.

表示“把某物给某人”时，可以说“give someone something”或“give something to someone”，不能说“give for me”。这里改为“gave me a bike”。

× I think so in our country, most of students ride a bike go to school.

✓ I think so. In our country, most students ride a bike to school.

“most of”后通常接有限定词加名词，例如“most of the students”；如果名词前没有限定词，应直接说“most students”。

× I think so in our country, most of students ride a bike go to school.

✓ I think so. In our country, most students ride a bike to school.

“ride a bike”和“go to school”不能直接这样连续放在一起。表达“骑自行车上学”时，可以说“ride a bike to school”，用“to school”补全目的地表达。