自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，并统一使用过去时：用“I had”而不是“I have”，用“went”或“rode”而不是“go”。“my brother buy me a bag”意思不清，请确认你想表达的是“哥哥给我买了一辆自行车”还是“哥哥带我出去骑车”。最后可以补充一个具体感受或回忆。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child, and my father and I often rode together at weekends. We usually cycled about ten kilometres, which was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

建议: 先明确区分普通自行车和电动自行车：可以说普通自行车不太流行，但电动自行车很常见。删除“I’m a college student”等与问题无关且不完整的内容；表达骑普通自行车很累时，用“tiring”，而不是“tired”。再用具体场景说明人们为什么选择电动自行车。

示例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially e-bikes. Many students use them because they are convenient and require less effort than regular bikes. People often ride them to school or to nearby shops.

× I have a bike in my childhood.

✓ I had a bike in my childhood.

“in my childhood”指过去的童年时期，因此动词应使用过去式。have 的过去式是 had。

× My father and I go outside to ride the bike.

✓ My father and I went outside to ride the bike.

这句话描述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。go 的过去式是 went。

× We went outside to ride the bike for maybe every weekend.

✓ We went outside to ride the bike almost every weekend.

表示“几乎每个周末”时，直接使用 almost every weekend，不需要介词 for。可以记住：every weekend 前通常不加 for。

× My brother buy me a bag.

✓ My brother bought me a bag.

句子描述童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。buy 的过去式是不规则变化 bought。

× We always have about 10 kilometers every weekend.

✓ We always rode for about 10 kilometers every weekend.

句子描述过去每个周末骑车的习惯，应使用过去时。表示骑行一段距离时可用 rode；ride 的过去式是 rode。

× Actually the bikes are not so popular in my country.

✓ Actually, bikes are not so popular in my country.

这里的 bikes 泛指自行车这一类事物，并不是指前文提到的某些特定自行车，因此不需要定冠词 the。

× Most of students like in my country.

✓ Most students like them in my country.

most 后面直接接复数名词时，不加 of；可以说 most students。若使用 most of，则后面通常需要限定词，例如 most of the students。

× It's too tired for riding a long time.

✓ It's too tiring to ride for a long time.

tired 通常形容感到疲倦的人；tiring 用来形容令人疲倦的事物或活动。这里描述骑车让人觉得累，应使用 tiring。表达“太……而不能……”时，可用 too tiring to ride。