自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，并用“和爸爸在花园练习骑车”补充了具体细节，结构清楚。注意时态一致：讲童年经历时，应将“practice”改为过去式“practiced”。另外，“I vividly remember I got”略显生硬，可以说“I vividly remember getting”。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I vividly remember getting my first one in elementary school, and my dad helped me practise riding it in our garden.

建议: 回答表达了明确观点，也提到了骑车的用途，但有几处需要修改：“more and more people riding”缺少谓语，应改为“more and more people are riding”；“school”重复了一次；“their job”可改为“work”。“It's quite important”指代不够明确，建议直接说明骑车为什么受欢迎，并补充一个具体原因。

示例: Yes, bikes are becoming increasingly popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to commute to work and school. They are especially useful in crowded cities because they are affordable and easy to park.

× Yes, I vividly remember I got my first bicycle when I was an elementary school student and I practice bike riding with my dad in our garden.

✓ Yes, I vividly remember that I got my first bicycle when I was an elementary school student and practiced riding it with my dad in our garden.

这句话描述的是小时候发生的事情，语境为过去时，因此“practice”应改为过去式“practiced”。另外，“remember”后补充“that”能让句子结构更清晰；“practice riding it”比“practice bike riding”更自然。

× Yes, definitely more and more people riding bikes not only for fun but also in their daily commute to their job or school or school.

✓ Yes, definitely. More and more people ride bikes not only for fun but also for their daily commute to work or school.

“More and more people riding bikes”缺少谓语动词，不能构成完整句子。表达一般情况时，应使用一般现在时“ride”。此外，“or school”重复了一次；“commute to work or school”表达更自然。