自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Trả lời trực tiếp bằng cấu trúc “I had a bike”. Dùng “ride” thay vì “eat” khi nói về việc đi xe đạp, và tránh lặp hoặc tự sửa giữa câu. Bạn có thể nói rõ chiếc xe trông như thế nào và mình thường dùng nó để làm gì. Hãy hoàn thành câu và giữ câu trả lời trong tối đa 5 câu.

示例: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I thought it was really cute. I used to ride it to school every day.

建议: Trả lời câu hỏi hiện tại một cách rõ ràng, chẳng hạn “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country”. Sửa các cấu trúc chưa chính xác như “every student have a buy” thành “many students had a bike”. Dùng từ nối như “For example” để dẫn vào trải nghiệm thời tiểu học, đồng thời phân biệt trải nghiệm trong quá khứ với tình hình hiện nay.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. When I was in primary school, many of my classmates had a bike, and we often rode to school. These days, bikes are still common, especially for short trips.

× Yes, I had to buy when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Had to buy expresses an obligation to purchase something, not ownership. Use had a bike to answer whether you owned one in the past.

× I use I used to eat to go to school every

✓ I used to go to school on it every day.

The original contains repeated and conflicting words, so the sentence structure is unclear. Use used to followed by the base verb go to describe a past habit. Every also needs a word such as day to complete the phrase.

× Yes it's popular in my country

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country.

The question asks about bikes, which is plural. Use the plural pronoun they and the plural verb are rather than it is.

× at this time I see when I study at primary school

✓ I remember that when I was in primary school

The reference to primary school describes a past period, so use the past-tense form was. The phrase at this time I see does not clearly express the intended meaning; I remember introduces the past recollection more clearly.

× every student have a buy for this

✓ every student had a bike

This describes a situation during the student's past school years, so use had rather than have. Bike is the correct noun for the vehicle; buy is a verb or a noun meaning a purchase.

× and we go to school by bike

✓ and we went to school by bike

The sentence refers to the time when the student was in primary school, so use the past-tense form went instead of go.