自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сначала ответьте прямо: «Yes, I did» или «No, I didn’t». Затем объясните, как часто вы катались или почему велосипед не стал вашим увлечением. Используйте прошедшее время: «I had», «I practised», «I didn’t spend». Избегайте неестественного выражения «How I remember» и не повторяйте одну и ту же мысль.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I mainly used it to learn how to ride, so cycling never became one of my regular hobbies.

建议: Дайте ясный ответ и уточните, в каких именно регионах велосипеды популярны. Фраза «South My house of my country» непонятна: назовите юг страны или конкретный регион. Объясните причину, например климат или удобство, и завершите мысль. Ответ обрывается, поэтому важно доводить предложение до конца; используйте связки «especially», «because» или «whereas».

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in the south of my country, where the weather is mild for much of the year. People often use them for short trips and exercise, whereas cycling is less common in colder regions.

× How I remember I have a bike in my childhood but it's not my favourite hobby was I just training how to ride the bike only and don't spend my time on it.

✓ As far as I remember, I had a bike in my childhood, but it wasn't my favourite hobby. I was just learning how to ride it and didn't spend much time on it.

The question asks about your childhood, so the verbs describing that time should be in the past tense: have becomes had, it's becomes it wasn't, and don't spend becomes didn't spend. Use the past continuous was learning for an activity in progress at that time.

× How I remember I have a bike in my childhood but it's not my favourite hobby was I just training how to ride the bike only and don't spend my time on it.

✓ As far as I remember, I had a bike in my childhood, but it wasn't my favourite hobby. I was just learning how to ride it and didn't spend much time on it.

How I remember is not a natural introductory phrase here; use As far as I remember. The clause but it's not my favourite hobby was I just training is also incorrectly arranged. Separate the ideas into clear clauses: it wasn't my favourite hobby and I was just learning how to ride it.

× From my point of view, bikes are really popular in my country, but only in South My house of my country because also in winter or autumn or in

✓ From my point of view, bikes are really popular in my country, but only in the southern part of my country. The rest of the sentence is incomplete in the transcript.

The phrase South My house of my country is not a grammatically complete or clear location phrase; if you mean the southern region, say the southern part of my country. The clause beginning with because is unfinished, so its intended meaning cannot be corrected reliably without the missing words.