自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答自己小时候有没有自行车，避免说“每个中国孩子都有自行车”这种过于绝对的概括。注意时态一致：回忆过去时用“was”和“rode”；“grandma parents house”应改为“my grandparents’ house”。可以补充一次具体的骑车经历，让回答更清晰自然。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was quite energetic, so I rode it whenever I had free time. Sometimes, I even rode it by myself to my grandparents’ house.

建议: 开头直接回答自行车在国内是否受欢迎，并说明具体是哪类自行车或骑行活动受欢迎。“Now only cares”意思不清楚，建议删掉或换成完整、相关的表达；“relieve and stress”应为“relieve stress”。可用“for example”连接具体例子，并避免只提明星而缺少更普遍的理由。

示例: Yes, cycling is quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people ride bikes to work or go cycling at weekends. It’s an affordable way to get around, and it also helps people stay fit and relieve stress.

× Yeah, of course every kid in China has a bike.

✓ Yeah, of course. Every kid in China had a bike.

问题是在回答“小时候是否有自行车”，语境是过去，但 has 是一般现在时。应改为过去式 had。若想表达现在的情况，has 可以保留；但此处应与问题的过去时间一致。

× When they was a kid I was really energetic and I ride the bike even to my grandma parents house myself.

✓ When I was a kid, I was really energetic, and I rode my bike even to my grandparents' house by myself.

前半句用 they 指代“小时候的自己”，后半句又改用 I，代词指代不一致。应统一使用 I。

× When they was a kid I was really energetic and I ride the bike even to my grandma parents house myself.

✓ When I was a kid, I was really energetic, and I rode my bike even to my grandparents' house by myself.

句子讲的是小时候发生的事情，ride 应使用过去式 rode。描述过去的经历时，要注意将动词变为相应的过去式。

× When they was a kid I was really energetic and I ride the bike even to my grandma parents house myself.

✓ When I was a kid, I was really energetic, and I rode my bike even to my grandparents' house by myself.

grandma parents 不能表示“祖父母”。这里应使用复数名词 grandparents；表示“祖父母的房子”时，在 grandparents 后加所有格撇号，写作 grandparents' house。

× Bikes are really popular recently.

✓ Bikes have been really popular recently.

recently 表示“最近”，通常强调从近期开始并持续到现在的情况。用现在完成时 have been 比一般现在时 are 更符合这里的时间含义。

× Now only cares.

✓ Nowadays, people only care about cars.

原句缺少明确的主语，而且 care 后面没有说明关心什么，句子结构和意思都不完整。应补上主语，并用 about 引出关心的对象。请根据原意确认 cars 是否为这里想表达的对象。

× It's a good way to relax and relieve and stress.

✓ It's a good way to relax and relieve stress.

relieve 是及物动词，后面直接接宾语 stress。原句在 relieve 和 stress 之间多用了 and，应删除。relax 和 relieve stress 可以由前面的 and 连接。