自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly, then add a clear supporting detail. Use the past tense consistently: “rode” instead of “ride,” and say “by bike” or “on my bike.” Break the run-on sentence into shorter sentences and add linking words such as “also.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school, and I also went cycling with my friends in the evenings.

建议: Give a complete, direct answer and make sure your supporting reasons are clear and relevant. Check the word “bikes,” use “they” to refer to bikes, and avoid stopping mid-sentence. You could mention health, convenience, or environmental benefits, using a linking phrase such as “because” or “for example.”

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them because cycling is an affordable and convenient way to travel, especially in busy cities. It is also a good way to stay active.

× Oh yes I had a bike when I was young I went to school with bike and ride with my friend every evening.

✓ Oh yes, I had a bike when I was young. I went to school by bike and rode with my friend every evening.

The answer describes a past routine, so ride should be in the past tense: rode. Use the past tense consistently when talking about activities you did as a child.

× Oh yes I had a bike when I was young I went to school with bike and ride with my friend every evening.

✓ Oh yes, I had a bike when I was young. I went to school by bike and rode with my friend every evening.

By bike is the natural phrase for describing the means of transportation. With bike is not idiomatic in this context. Use by bike when explaining how you traveled.

× Definitely, I think Bice are popular in my country nowadays because it is good for hair and it's cold it is easy to

✓ Definitely, I think Bice are popular in my country nowadays because they are good for health. [The rest of the answer is incomplete.]

The plural noun Bice is referred to by it, a singular pronoun. Use they to refer to a plural noun. The phrase after and is incomplete in the transcript, so it cannot be corrected reliably without more context.