自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a complete answer: the final sentence is unfinished, and “walk to the school” is less natural here than “walk to school.” Keep the past tense consistent by using “walked.” Add one specific detail explaining what you enjoyed about walking.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my family was having financial difficulties. As a result, I usually walked to school. I didn’t mind, though, because it gave me a chance to chat with my friends along the way.

建议: Remove the repeated “because” and make your main point more direct. Your reasons are relevant; connect them smoothly and consider adding a specific detail, such as how limited cycle lanes affect people’s willingness to ride.

示例: Not really. Bicycles aren’t very popular in my country because there are few dedicated cycle lanes, which can make riding feel unsafe. As a result, most people prefer to travel by car.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was young because my family had financial difficulties. As a result, I often walk to the school but I really enjoy it because I

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was young because my family had financial difficulties. As a result, I often walked to the school but I really enjoy it because I

The answer describes a repeated action during the past, so walk should be in the past tense: walked. The transcript ends with because I, which appears incomplete; no completion has been inferred.

× Not really because Because bicycles are not common in my country.

✓ Not really, because bicycles are not common in my country.

Because is repeated. Use it only once to introduce the reason. A comma after Not really also makes the opening phrase easier to read.