自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly and use the past tense because the question asks about your childhood: say “I didn’t have” rather than “I don’t have.” Add a brief, specific detail to make your response more complete.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because it was quite close to my home.

建议: Your answer gives a clear opinion, but “I almost see a bike everywhere” is unnatural; say “I see bikes almost everywhere.” The final sentence is incomplete and unclear, and “family” needs a singular verb if you keep that structure. Explain specifically where people ride bikes or why they are popular, and avoid making a broad claim about poorer families.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I see them almost everywhere, especially in busy cities and residential areas. Many people use them for short trips because they’re affordable and convenient.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about the past, as shown by 'when you were a child.' Use the past-tense auxiliary 'didn't' rather than the present-tense 'don't.'

× I almost see a bike everywhere.

✓ I see bikes almost everywhere.

In this context, 'almost' should modify 'everywhere' to mean that bikes are present in nearly all places. Placing it before 'see' can suggest that you nearly see a bike but do not actually see one. Put 'almost' before 'everywhere.'

× Even the poorest family go for a bike to buy

✓ Even the poorest family goes to buy a bike.

'Family' is singular here, so its verb must also be singular: use 'goes,' not 'go.' The natural structure is 'goes to buy a bike,' with the object 'a bike' after 'buy.'