自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接说明了自己没有自行车，也提到了父母希望你学骑车以及你害怕骑车的原因，内容相关。但句子过长，重复使用“but”，而且“I'm always being afraid”不自然；“since I was seventeen”也与童年经历的时间关系不清楚。建议用一到两句说明没有自行车、当时为什么没学会，并使用过去时。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. My parents wanted me to learn, but I was afraid of falling, so I never really learned how to ride.

建议: 你直接回答了问题，也提供了大学校园里的例子，能够说明自行车为什么受欢迎。不过，“because like”属于多余的口语填充词；后半句语法不够清楚，“most of the lectures”应改为“most of the lecture halls/classes”。建议先概括自行车受欢迎的原因，再用校园通勤的例子支撑观点。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among university students. Many lecture halls are quite far from the dormitories, so cycling is a quick and convenient way to get to class.

× No, I don't really have a bike however my parents always want me to learn how to ride a bicycle but I'm always being afraid of actually taking a ride, so I never learnt how to ride that since I was seventeen

✓ No, I didn't really have a bike. My parents always wanted me to learn how to ride one, but I was always afraid of actually riding, so I didn't learn how to ride one until I was seventeen.

问题询问的是你小时候的情况，因此描述当时的经历应使用过去时。原句中的 “don't have”“want” 和 “I'm” 应分别改为 “didn't have”“wanted” 和 “was”。表达过去一直害怕时，用 “was afraid” 即可，不需要用 “being”。“since I was seventeen” 不适合这里表达“直到十七岁才学会”；可用 “until I was seventeen”。

× Yes, I do think bikes are quite popular here because like when you're in college Which most of the lectures you take is a little bit far from your dormitory at that time getting on a bike is the best choice.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are quite popular here because, when you're in college, most of the lecture halls you go to are a little far from your dormitory, so riding a bike is the best choice.

原句中 “because like when...” 后面的从句结构不完整；“Which” 也不能这样连接后面的内容。可直接用 “because” 引出原因，并用 “so” 引出结果。调整后，句子结构更清晰：上大学时，教学楼离宿舍较远，所以骑自行车是不错的选择。

× Yes, I do think bikes are quite popular here because like when you're in college Which most of the lectures you take is a little bit far from your dormitory at that time getting on a bike is the best choice.

✓ Yes, I do think bikes are quite popular here because, when you're in college, most of the lecture halls you go to are a little far from your dormitory, so riding a bike is the best choice.

主语 “most of the lecture halls” 是复数，因此谓语动词应使用 “are”，不能用 “is”。判断主谓一致时，应根据真正的主语 “lecture halls” 的单复数来选择动词形式。