自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly using the past tense: “I had a bike when I was a child.” The word “bank” does not fit the question, and “that is reported by my father” is unclear. Add one relevant detail, such as who bought the bike or where you rode it. Avoid hesitation words such as “uh” where possible.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood.

建议: Make the answer more natural by saying “bikes are very popular here” rather than “this is very popular.” Use “many students” instead of “many of these students,” and correct the phrases to “go hiking” and “at the weekend” or “on weekends.” Support your answer with a specific reason or example.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among students. Many of them cycle to school because it is affordable and convenient, and people also ride bikes for exercise or weekend trips.

× Yes, I have a bank in my childhood and uh, that is reported by my father.

✓ Yes, I had a bank in my childhood, and that was reported by my father.

The answer describes something that happened during childhood, so use the past-tense verb had instead of have. The reporting also refers to a past event, so was reported is consistent with the past-time context.

× Yes, this is very popular here.

✓ Yes, they are very popular here.

The answer refers to bikes, which is plural, so the plural pronoun they is needed instead of the singular pronoun this. Use a plural verb, are, to agree with they.

× Many of these students ride the bike, go to school, and go to for hiking, even in a weekend.

✓ Many of these students ride the bike, go to school, and go hiking, even on weekends.

The expression is go hiking; it does not take to before hiking. For a recurring activity, use on weekends rather than in a weekend.