自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsun, ancak cevap kısa ve “so that's all that I can say” ifadesi doğal değil. “I love riding bike” yerine “I loved riding my bike” demelisin. Çocukken bisikleti nerede kullandığını veya nasıl hissettirdiğini belirten kısa ve somut bir ayrıntı ekleyerek cevabını geliştir.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was six. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, especially after school. It was one of my favorite ways to spend time outdoors.

建议: Cevabın karşılaştırma içeriyor, fakat cümleler tamamlanmamış ve çok sayıda duraksama var. Önce net bir görüş belirt; ardından Hollanda ile Türkiye’yi kısa ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla karşılaştır. “Every people” yerine “everyone”, “in Netherlands” yerine “in the Netherlands” ve “roads are for just cars” yerine “roads are mainly designed for cars” kullan. Son cümleyi tamamlayıp bisiklet yollarının eksikliğinin etkisini açıklayabilirsin.

示例: No, I don’t think bikes are very popular in Turkey. In the Netherlands, for example, many people cycle because there are safe bike lanes. In Turkey, roads are often designed mainly for cars, so cycling can feel unsafe. I think more bike lanes would encourage people to ride.

× I love riding bike, so that's all that I can say.

✓ I love riding a bike, so that's all I can say.

The singular countable noun bike needs an article in this expression. Use riding a bike. The phrase that I can say is grammatically correct, though that is optional here.

× ...in Netherlands...

✓ ...in the Netherlands...

The country name the Netherlands takes the definite article the. Use in the Netherlands.

× ...every people ride a bike...

✓ ...everyone rides a bike...

Every cannot directly modify the plural noun people. Use everyone, or say every person. In this sentence, everyone is a natural choice.

× ...every people ride a bike...

✓ ...everyone rides a bike...

The subject everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes the singular verb rides, not ride.

× Not in my country, bikes are not popular...

✓ Bikes are not popular in my country...

The original wording places Not in my country before a complete clause in a way that creates an awkward sentence structure. Put the location phrase after the subject and verb for a clear statement.

× ...we don't have a place to ride a bike in our streets...

✓ ...we don't have a place to ride a bike on our streets...

Use on with streets when referring to locations or activities taking place there. The natural phrase is on our streets.

× Our roads are for just cars.

✓ Our roads are just for cars.

Just should be placed before the phrase it limits. Here, it limits for cars, so the natural order is are just for cars.

× And I think that's very bad because when I want to.

✓ And I think that's very bad because I want to ride a bike.

The clause because when I want to is incomplete: want to needs a clear action, and when introduces a time clause that also needs a complete idea. Finish the thought with the action you mean, such as ride a bike.