自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答没有直接回答“小时候有没有自行车”，而且把“bike”听成了“back”，并重复了“child”。先确认问题中的关键词，再用“Yes/No + 简短原因或细节”作答。注意回忆过去时，使用“did/had”，不要用“do/have”。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.

建议: 你的回答没有表达对问题的看法，听起来像是重复提问，并且没有回答自行车在你们国家是否流行。抓住关键词“bikes”和“popular”，先明确表态，再补充一个具体原因或例子。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children and people who live in smaller cities. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around.

× Do you have a back when you are a child child?

✓ Did you have a back when you were a child?

问题问的是小时候的经历，因此要用过去时。把“Do you have”改为“Did you have”，把“are”改为“were”。“child”重复属于口语重复，不是此处要报告的语法类型，因此在修正版中删去。

× Do you think the patter of puppy in your country?

✓ Do you think the patter of puppies is common in your country?

“Do you think”后接的内容需要是完整的陈述结构。原句中的“the patter of puppy in your country”缺少谓语，因此句子结构不完整。可在该部分补上谓语“is common”，并将泛指的“puppy”改为复数“puppies”。