自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently. Avoid repeating “when I was a child”; explain clearly whether your parents allowed you to have a bike and, if possible, add a brief reason.

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents didn’t let me have one because they were worried it might not be safe.

建议: Give a complete answer and avoid repeating words. Use a clear example of where people ride bikes, such as commuting to work or going to school, and connect your idea with a linking phrase like “for example.”

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride them to school or work, especially in cities where traffic is heavy.

× I didn't have even a bike

✓ I didn't even have a bike

The adverb even should come after the auxiliary verb didn't and before the main verb have. This is the natural word order for emphasizing that you had no bike.

× I'm a child when I was a child

✓ I was a child

The question asks about your childhood, so the past tense is needed. Use was, not am, to refer to a past state.

× my parents never me to have it

✓ My parents never allowed me to have one.

The original clause is missing a main verb between never and me. Use allowed me to have to express that your parents did not permit you to own a bike. One is more natural than it when referring back to a bike.

× In my country, so many people use use bikes use your bikes to go to score or

✓ In my country, so many people use bikes to go to school.

The repeated words make the sentence difficult to follow, and the final or leaves the thought unfinished. The corrected sentence removes the repetitions and gives it a complete structure. School is the likely intended word in this context.