自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再按时间顺序补充一到两个细节。注意过去经历要使用过去时，例如用“bought”和“rode”；避免重复表达“just”和“bicycle”。“I always ride it brought it...”语法不清楚，请明确说明你骑车去哪里或和谁一起骑。答案控制在五句以内。

示例: Yes, I did. When I was about five, my dad bought me a small bicycle. I used to ride it with my brothers and friends in a nearby park, and I really enjoyed spending time outdoors with them.

建议: 先明确回答“自行车在你们国家是否流行”，再解释原因并给出具体例子。注意使用自然搭配，例如“interest in cycling”，不要把“obsessed with”和“interested in”混在一起；“There are more and more people are...”应改为“There are more and more people who...”。目前答案以“and”结尾，内容不完整，请补全句子，并使用一个连接词组织理由。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more popular in my country. Social media has encouraged more people to take up cycling, and many people enjoy it as a way to stay fit. For example, I often see groups of cyclists riding in parks and along the river at weekends.

× When I was about five years old my dad just bought a bicycle but just a small size of bicycle for me and I always ride it brought it to my brothers and the other children like my friends in the in the food.

✓ When I was about five years old, my dad bought me a bicycle, but it was a small one. I always rode it and brought it to my brothers and the other children, like my friends.

这段话描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此应使用一般过去时。原句中的“ride”应改为“rode”。“brought”已经是过去式。

× I think it is with the development of social media and the increasing interest about biking from people.

✓ I think biking is becoming more popular with the development of social media and people's increasing interest in biking.

表示“对某事的兴趣”时，interest 后面通常接介词 in，而不是 about。因此应说“interest in biking”。

× There are more and more people are obsessed with interested in the sport and

✓ More and more people are interested in the sport.

原句中“There are”和“people are”重复使用了两个句子结构，导致句子结构错误。表达“越来越多的人……”时，直接说“More and more people are……”即可。“obsessed with interested in”也将两个表达混在一起，应保留一个完整表达，例如“are interested in”。