自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly instead of repeating it. Say whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific details, such as when you rode it or what you enjoyed about it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.

建议: Your answer gives a relevant reason, but it ends abruptly and has several grammar issues. Use “bikes” or “cycling” naturally, say “ride bikes,” and use “transport options” instead of “transportation system” here. Finish with a specific example, and keep the response to no more than five sentences.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Many people ride them because traffic can be heavy and cycling is often quicker for short journeys. They are also cheaper to maintain than cars. For example, I often see people cycling to work or to nearby shops.

× Actually, yes, the bikes are very common in our country.

✓ Actually, yes, bikes are very common in our country.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, not to a specific group of bikes. In general statements, omit the definite article the before a plural count noun.

× It's like a lot of people ride bike just because of the traffic and things.

✓ It's like a lot of people ride bikes just because of the traffic and things.

Bike is a singular count noun here but is used without an article. Since the sentence describes people riding bikes in general, use the plural form bikes.

× So people prefer bike over cars and other transportation system because it's easy to use for regular transportation and

✓ So people prefer bikes over cars and other transportation systems because it's easy to use for regular transportation and

The sentence refers to bikes and transportation systems generally, so use the plural forms bikes and systems. The final and appears to introduce more information, so it can remain if the speaker continues the sentence.