自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，但“when I watch out”和“a short bike”表达不清，时态和语法也有错误。可以直接说明小时候有没有自己的自行车，再补充一次骑车经历。注意用过去时，例如“didn’t have”“tried”和“rented”；“It was my first time trying to ride a bike”比“It’s my first time to trying...”自然。

示例: I didn’t have a bike of my own when I was a child, but I tried riding one once. I rented a bike, and although it was difficult at first, I really enjoyed it.

建议: 你表达了自行车很受欢迎这一观点，也尝试举出人们骑车的场景，但主谓一致、动词形式和词语选择有较多问题。“I really thinks a bike are”应改为“I think bikes are”，“in their free lives”可改为“in their free time”，“read a bike”应为“ride a bike”。建议用一两个具体地点或用途支撑观点，避免重复和过多停顿。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or use them for exercise in their free time. For example, it’s common to see people cycling around lakes and along rivers.

× Actually I don't have a bike when I watch out

✓ Actually, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

问题问的是学生小时候的情况，因此应使用过去时。将“don't have”改为“didn't have”，并将“watch out”改为符合语境的“was a child”。

× I try a bike once.

✓ I tried riding a bike once.

这里描述的是过去发生的一次经历，动词“try”应使用过去式“tried”。

× It's my first time to trying to ride a bike

✓ It was my first time trying to ride a bike.

“to”后不能直接接“trying”构成这里的表达。可以说“my first time trying to ride”，其中“trying”作动名词；结合过去经历，也将“It's”改为“It was”。

× I love it.

✓ I loved it.

这句话描述的是过去第一次骑车时的感受，应使用过去式“loved”，而不是现在时“love”。

× I really thinks

✓ I really think

主语是“I”，谓语动词应使用原形“think”，不能加第三人称单数词尾“-s”。

× a bike are very popular

✓ bikes are very popular

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，并与复数谓语“are”搭配。

× Everybody's are

✓ Everybody is

“Everybody”虽然表示许多人，但语法上属于单数主语，因此应搭配“is”，不能搭配“are”。

× They trying to trying to read a short bike or, or ride a bike around a, a lake and, uh, a river.

✓ They are trying to ride a bike around a lake or a river.

“They trying”缺少助动词“are”，现在进行时需要使用“主语 + be动词 + 动词-ing”的结构。表达“尝试骑车”时可说“trying to ride a bike”。