自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提供了买车和骑车上学的细节，但时态和表达不够准确。注意讲过去的经历时统一使用过去时，例如将“start”改为“started”、“ride”改为“rode”；“as a birthday present”比“'cause my birthday gifts”自然。骑车上学的原因可以说得更清楚，例如妈妈太忙，无法接送你。减少“uh”等填充词，并用连接词组织补充信息。

示例: Yes, I did. My mum bought me a bike as a birthday present when I was about eight, and that was when I started learning to ride. Later, I often rode it to elementary school because my mum was too busy to take me.

建议: 观点明确，也举出了台北公共自行车政策作为具体依据。不过，“popular and popular”应改为“more and more popular”；描述当前政策时应使用现在时，例如“can ride”或“can use”。“the city where I lived in Taipei”表达不清，可以直接说“in Taipei”。最后的“it's get”应改为“they are becoming”或“it is becoming”，并说明这项政策如何鼓励人们骑车。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are becoming more and more popular in Taiwan, especially in Taipei. The city has a public bike scheme that lets people ride for free for the first 30 minutes. As a result, cycling is an affordable and convenient option for short trips.

× About 8 years ago my mom bought me a bike 'cause my birthday gifts and I start to learn to bike.

✓ About eight years ago, my mom bought me a bike as a birthday gift, and I started learning to ride it.

句子讲的是八年前发生的事情，因此动词应使用过去时。这里的“start”应改为“started”。

× About 8 years ago my mom bought me a bike 'cause my birthday gifts and I start to learn to bike.

✓ About eight years ago, my mom bought me a bike as a birthday gift, and I started learning to ride it.

“'cause”是“because”的口语形式，后面通常接完整的句子；原句后面接的是名词短语“my birthday gifts”，所以连接方式不正确。可以改用“as a birthday gift”（作为生日礼物）。

× And uh, when I went into elementary school, I always ride up my bike to school because my mom is too busy.

✓ When I went to elementary school, I always rode my bike to school because my mom was too busy.

这句话描述的是过去上小学时的习惯，因此“ride”应改为过去式“rode”，而“is”也应改为过去式“was”，以保持时态一致。

× And uh, when I went into elementary school, I always ride up my bike to school because my mom is too busy.

✓ When I went to elementary school, I always rode my bike to school because my mom was too busy.

“ride a bike”表示“骑自行车”，动词“ride”后直接接自行车，不需要介词“up”。此外，“go to school”是表示去上学的常见搭配。

× Recently it got popular and popular because, uh, the city where I lived in Taipei, we have a new policy that a citizen could ride a bike for free, uh, in the 1st 30 minutes.

✓ Recently, bikes have become more and more popular because Taipei has introduced a new policy that allows citizens to ride a bike for free for the first 30 minutes.

要表达“越来越受欢迎”，应使用“more and more popular”，不能说“popular and popular”。

× Recently it got popular and popular because, uh, the city where I lived in Taipei, we have a new policy that a citizen could ride a bike for free, uh, in the 1st 30 minutes.

✓ Recently, bikes have become more and more popular because Taipei has introduced a new policy that allows citizens to ride a bike for free for the first 30 minutes.

“the city where I lived in Taipei, we have...”把地点从句和主句错误地连接在一起，导致句子结构不完整。可以直接用“Taipei has introduced...”来说明台北推出了新政策。

× Recently it got popular and popular because, uh, the city where I lived in Taipei, we have a new policy that a citizen could ride a bike for free, uh, in the 1st 30 minutes.

✓ Recently, bikes have become more and more popular because Taipei has introduced a new policy that allows citizens to ride a bike for free for the first 30 minutes.

这里描述的是目前有效的政策，使用“could”容易让人理解为过去或假设的情况。可以改为“allows citizens to...”，清楚表达政策现在允许市民骑车。

× Recently it got popular and popular because, uh, the city where I lived in Taipei, we have a new policy that a citizen could ride a bike for free, uh, in the 1st 30 minutes.

✓ Recently, bikes have become more and more popular because Taipei has introduced a new policy that allows citizens to ride a bike for free for the first 30 minutes.

表示免费骑车持续的时间时，应使用“for the first 30 minutes”，而不是“in the first 30 minutes”。

× So I think it's get more popular.

✓ So I think it's getting more popular.

这里“it's”表示“it is”。进行时结构应为“be动词 + 动词-ing”，因此“get”应改为“getting”。