自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，也提到了小时候骑车的习惯。注意删除重复的“and”，并把“hang around”换成更准确的表达，例如“ride around”，避免听起来像是在闲逛。可以补充一个具体细节，让回答更生动；控制在两三句话即可。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school, especially with my friends.

建议: 先直接回答“自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎”。“Their sparks”表达不清楚，建议直接说“Bikes are quite popular”。描述一般情况时用现在时，例如“see”，而不是“saw”；同时避免重复表达骑车的人很多。可以举出通勤或休闲骑行的具体例子。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling to work or school, especially in busy cities. Many people also ride bikes for exercise or to explore the city at weekends.

× I usually saw people go to work or go to school by bike and when I travel around different cities.

✓ I usually see people go to work or school by bike when I travel around different cities.

这里描述的是通常发生的情况和经常看到的现象，应使用一般现在时。将表示过去的“saw”改为“see”，使其与“usually”和“when I travel”所表达的一般情况保持一致。