自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答童年时是否有自行车，并注意时态一致：谈过去应使用“had”，而不是“have”。“The one is white”应改为“One is white”；第二句中间需要停顿或使用连词。回答内容具体，可以补充自行车给你带来的感受。

示例: Yes, I had two bicycles when I was a child. One was white, and the other was black. I especially liked the black one because my father gave it to me when I was fifteen.

建议: 回答观点时使用完整表达，例如“I think riding a bike is popular”。注意语法：“骑自行车”作主语时用“riding a bike”；“买车”应说“afford a car”，而不是“pay a car”。原句信息挤在一起，建议用“because”和“also”等连接词组织理由，并补充具体原因。请确认“Radaback”想表达的词；如果指“骑自行车”，可直接说“cycling”或“riding a bike”。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them because they are affordable and convenient, especially for short trips. They are also a good way to avoid traffic.

× Yes, I have two bicycles.

✓ Yes, I had two bicycles.

问题问的是你小时候有没有自行车，时间背景是过去，因此应使用 have 的过去式 had。回答过去经历时，要注意让动词时态与问题中的时间保持一致。

× The one is white and the other is black I really like that black bicycle.

✓ The one is white, and the other is black. I really like that black bicycle.

原句把两个完整句子直接连在一起，造成句子连接不当。可在 black 后面加句号，或者使用合适的标点和连接词。说话时也要在两层意思之间稍作停顿。

× Right now I think ride a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay a car so I think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

✓ Right now, I think riding a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay for a car. I also think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

ride a bicycle 在句中作主语，应使用动名词 riding a bicycle。动词短语作主语时，通常需要使用动词的 -ing 形式。

× Right now I think ride a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay a car so I think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

✓ Right now, I think riding a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay for a car. I also think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

表示“为某物付钱”时，pay 后面要用介词 for，因此应说 pay for a car，而不是 pay a car。可以记住搭配 pay for something。

× Right now I think ride a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay a car so I think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

✓ Right now, I think riding a bicycle is popular because I don't have enough money to pay for a car. I also think Radaback is convenient and cheap.

原句在 because 引导的原因部分之后又用 so 连接结果，结构显得重复且不够清晰。可以用 because 引出原因，并另起一句补充观点；也可以用 so 引出结果，但不要在同一因果结构中重复使用两者。