自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再用一到两句补充具体信息。注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时，例如“had”“was”和“rode”。“write it to school”等表达不自然，建议用“ride it to school”。另外，句子末尾关于“night board”的意思不清楚，请确认想表达的内容，避免使用听众无法理解的词。答案控制在五句以内。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a blue bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it to school almost every day. My parents gave it to me for my birthday, so it was very special to me.

建议: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，并确保回答中的关键词与问题一致；这里应使用“bikes”而不是“bags”。接着给出清楚、具体的原因，例如自行车适合短途出行、成本低或比较环保。注意搭配和语法，如“for short commutes”“shopping is cheap”“environmentally friendly”。举例时使用完整且易懂的句子，并避免含义不清的词语。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them for short commutes because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, you can often see people cycling to work or to nearby shops.

× Yes, I did. I have a bicycle when I was a child because my present spot is for me on my 17th birthday and I used to write it to school and I read the night board every day.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child because my present spot is for me on my 17th birthday and I used to write it to school and I read the night board every day.

“when I was a child”明确指过去，因此描述当时拥有自行车应使用一般过去时“had”，不能用表示现在的“have”。这里只修改符合指定语法类型的问题；其他表达存在的疑似用词问题不属于给定的语法问题类型，因此不作修改。

× Uh, yes, I think bags are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commuters and the shopping there are cheap and involutely friendly.

✓ Uh, yes, I think bags are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commuters and the shopping there is cheap and involutely friendly.

句子的主语是不可数名词“shopping”，所以谓语动词应使用单数“is”，而不是“are”。