自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你直接回答了问题，也提到了自行车的颜色和你对它的喜爱。不过，“The bike was my father bought for me”语法错误；可说“my father bought it for me”。注意用过去时描述童年经历，并用连接词把信息连起来。

示例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a red bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

建议: 回答切题，并用街上骑车的人和自己的经历支持观点。建议用句号或连接词拆分较长的句子，避免重复使用“bike”；还可以补充骑车受欢迎的具体原因，例如方便或经济。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. You can see many people cycling to work or school in the morning. They’re convenient and affordable, and I used to ride one to school too.

× The bike was my father bought for me

✓ The bike was bought for me by my father

这里想表达“自行车是爸爸买给我的”，需要使用被动语态：主语“The bike”后接“was + 过去分词 bought”，再用“by my father”说明动作的执行者。

× the colour is red I like it very much

✓ the colour was red, and I liked it very much

回答描述的是童年时的自行车，与过去的时间背景一致，因此应将“is”改为“was”，将“like”改为“liked”。连接两个分句时可加“and”，并使用逗号。