自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，并注意区分 bike（自行车）和 bag（包）。用过去时描述童年经历：例如将“ride a bike to school”用于“骑自行车上学”，将“my dad picked me up”用于“爸爸接我”。“10 minutes far”不自然，可改为“10 minutes away”。最后说明自行车给你带来的具体好处，避免使用意思不清的“That could make me very convenient.”

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My school was only about ten minutes away, so I rode my bike there every day. My dad usually picked me up after school, which made getting around really convenient.

建议: 先明确回答自行车在你们国家是否受欢迎，并说明具体原因。注意用“bikes”，不要误说成“back”；表达观点时避免重复主语（“our President Xi Jinping, he”）和混乱的时态、情态动词（“could would”）。“allocating the sports”不符合这里的意思；如果想表达政府鼓励运动，可以说“encourages people to exercise”。也可以补充通勤、健身或交通便利等具体原因。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for exercise or to travel short distances. They are convenient and inexpensive, and cycling is also a good way to stay healthy.

× My home is only about 10 minutes far from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad will pick me up to my house.

✓ My home is only about 10 minutes far from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad would pick me up to my house.

这句话描述的是过去的童年经历，因此叙述中应保持过去时。这里的 will 应改为 would，表示过去经常发生的事情。

× My home is only about 10 minutes far from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad will pick me up to my house.

✓ My home is only about 10 minutes far from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad will pick me up and take me home.

pick someone up 表示“接某人”，后面不直接接 to my house。要表达“接我回家”，可以说 pick me up and take me home。

× My home is only about 10 minutes far from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad will pick me up to my house.

✓ My home is only about 10 minutes away from the school, so I rode a back to school every day and my dad will pick me up to my house.

表达距离时，通常使用“时间或距离 + away from”，而不是“时间或距离 + far from”。可以说 about 10 minutes away from the school。

× That could make me very convenient.

✓ That could make things very convenient for me.

convenient 描述事情或安排是否方便，不用来描述人。可以用“make things convenient for me”表达“让这件事对我来说很方便”。

× Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our body.

✓ Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our body.

主语 our President Xi Jinping 后面又重复使用了 he，造成主语重复。应删除 he，保留一个主语。

× Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our body.

✓ Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could strengthen our body.

could 和 would 都是情态动词，不能在这里连续放在同一个动词前。保留其中一个即可，例如 could strengthen。

× Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our body.

✓ Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating sports because sports could would strengthen our body.

泛指体育运动时，sports 前通常不加定冠词 the。只有在指前文提到的特定运动项目时，才使用 the sports。

× Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our body.

✓ Yes, I think back is very popular in my country because our President Xi Jinping, he is allocating the sports because the sports could would strengthen our bodies.

这里的 our 指“我们每个人的身体”，涉及多人，因此 body 应使用复数 bodies。