自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“小时候有没有自行车”，再解释家庭经济原因和你当时的感受。注意使用过去时，例如“couldn’t afford”，并用“afford to buy a bike”表达“买得起自行车”。删去意思不清的部分，控制在三句话左右；可以用“However”连接转折，并说明现在是否打算买一辆。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford to buy one. I really wanted one, though, and I used to feel a little disappointed when I saw other children riding theirs. I’m thinking about buying one for myself now.

建议: 明确回答现在自行车是否受欢迎，并区分过去和现在。避免把“普通人都很穷”作为笼统概括；可以具体说明自行车便宜、适合短途出行，而现在汽车更普及。注意语法：用“when I was a child”“people could afford”和“cars are more popular”，并用“However”或“whereas”连接对比。

示例: Bikes used to be very popular in my country because they were an affordable way to get around. These days, more people own cars, especially in larger cities, so cars are probably more popular. However, bikes are still commonly used for short trips and exercise.

× my parents can't afford it buying a bike for me

✓ my parents couldn't afford to buy me a bike

这段话描述的是童年时的情况，因此应使用过去时。这里的“can't”应改为“couldn't”。

× my parents can't afford it buying a bike for me

✓ my parents couldn't afford to buy me a bike

“afford”后面通常接不定式“to do”，不能说“afford it buying”。建议记住结构“afford to do something”。

× there is not much work

✓ there wasn't much work

这里描述的是过去的情况，所以应将“is”改为过去式“was”。

× But this is something I always looking for to get on

✓ But this was something I was always looking forward to getting

句子谈论的是童年时一直期待的事情，因此应使用过去时“was”。建议用“look forward to doing something”表示“期待做某事”。

× But this is something I always looking for to get on

✓ But this was something I was always looking forward to getting

在短语“look forward to”中，“to”是介词，后面应接动名词，因此应说“looking forward to getting”，而不是“looking for to get”。

× I might be get now one by myself

✓ I might get one for myself now

情态动词“might”后应直接接动词原形，不能在动词原形前加“be”。建议使用“might + 动词原形”，如“might get”。

× When I was child

✓ When I was a child

“child”是单数可数名词，前面需要使用冠词。这里应加不定冠词“a”。

× the average people ... is poor

✓ average people were poor

“people”是复数主语，不能与单数动词“is”搭配；结合过去的时间背景，应使用复数过去式“were”。

× the only things they can afford is bite

✓ the only thing they could afford was a bike

这里表达的是他们能负担得起的唯一一样东西，因此应使用单数“thing”，而不是复数“things”。

× the only things they can afford is bite

✓ the only thing they could afford was a bike

改成单数主语“the only thing”后，谓语也应使用单数形式“was”，不能使用“is”。

× the only things they can afford is bite

✓ the only thing they could afford was a bike

句子描述过去的情况，所以“can afford”应改为“could afford”，相应的系动词也应使用过去式“was”。

× the only things they can afford is bite

✓ the only thing they could afford was a bike

“bike”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词；此处应用不定冠词“a”。

× the technology develop it

✓ technology has developed

“technology”是单数主语，不能与动词原形“develop”直接搭配。这里可用“has developed”表达技术已经发展。

× everyone can afford car instead of the bike

✓ everyone can afford a car instead of bikes

“car”是单数可数名词，前面需要不定冠词“a”。泛指自行车时通常用复数“bikes”，不需要定冠词“the”。

× So I think car ma most popular than bike

✓ So I think cars are more popular than bikes

“popular”与另一事物进行比较时，应使用比较级“more popular”，不能用“most popular”。“than”后面也应接比较对象“bikes”。