自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: The answer is difficult to understand because “I have read 1” does not clearly say whether you had a bike. Use the past simple to talk about your childhood, and add one relevant detail, such as how often you rode it or where you used it.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was eight years old. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school.

建议: You answer the question, but several grammar errors and the unfinished final sentence make your response hard to follow. Say “there are a lot of bikes,” explain your opinion with a clear linking word, and finish the comparison with cars. Avoid repeating or correcting yourself mid-sentence.

示例: Yes, bikes are very popular in Vietnam, especially in busy cities where many people use them for commuting. Riding a bike is good for your health and can be convenient for short trips, although I prefer travelling by car when the weather is bad.

× Yes, I have read 1 when I was 8 years old.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was eight years old.

The question asks about a time in the past, and the phrase when I was eight years old confirms that past time. Use the simple past had rather than the present perfect have. This correction assumes read 1 was intended to mean had one.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

The clause and is developing country is missing a clear subject, and the final because clause is incomplete. Connect the description to Vietnam with which is, and finish the because clause with a reason. In speaking, make sure each clause has a subject and a verb, and avoid ending with because unless you provide the reason.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

The phrase a lot of bikes in the streets needs a verb to express that bikes exist there. Use there are before a plural noun: there are a lot of bikes. Use there is with a singular noun.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

After a lot of, use the plural form bikes when referring to multiple bicycles. Remember to add -s or -es to countable nouns when they refer to more than one.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

When use functions as the subject of the clause after I think, use its -ing form: using a bike. A useful pattern is using something is good for your health.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

The usual expression is in my opinion, not from my opinion. Learn this phrase as a fixed expression.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

The phrase but not but repeats and misuses the conjunction. Use but once to introduce the contrast, and include a complete clause after it: but it is inconvenient.

× Yes I live in Vietnam and is developing country so a lot of bike in the streets and I think use bike is good for health but not but inconvenient. So from my opinion I choose car because.

✓ Yes, I live in Vietnam, which is a developing country, so there are a lot of bikes in the streets. I think using a bike is good for your health, but it is inconvenient. So, in my opinion, I choose a car because it is more convenient.

Use a before the singular countable noun country, bike, and car. In this context, say good for your health rather than good for health. Check whether a singular countable noun needs an article such as a or the.