自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes, I had a bike when I was ashamed. It was a small red bicycle that my father bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it is around the bark with my friends.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, bikes are quite popular in Oman, especially among children and young people.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 58.0建议: أجبتَ مباشرة وقدّمتَ تفاصيل شخصية جيدة عن الدراجة وهدية عيد ميلادك. لكن توجد أخطاء تجعل المعنى غير واضح: استخدم **young** بدل **ashamed**، و**park** بدل **bark**، واحذف **is** بعد **ride it**. انتبه أيضاً إلى نطق الكلمات واختيارها، وحافظ على الجملة بسيطة وطبيعية.
示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was young. It was a small red bicycle that my father gave me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around the park with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 76.0建议: إجابتك واضحة وطبيعية وتجيب عن السؤال مباشرة، كما أن تحديد الفئات العمرية مناسب. لتحسينها، أضف سبباً أو مثالاً محدداً، واستخدم رابطاً مثل **because** أو **for example** لدعم رأيك، مع إبقاء الإجابة قصيرة.
示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Oman, especially among children and young people. For example, many children ride them in parks or around their neighbourhoods for fun and exercise.
语法
× It was a small red bicycle that my father bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it is around the bark with my friends.
✓ It was a small red bicycle that my father bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it around the bark with my friends.
The verb pattern used to ride is correct, but the extra is makes the second clause ungrammatical. Remove is after it. Check that each clause has only the verb forms it needs.
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