自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“没有”，再补充一个清晰的原因或相关细节。注意讲过去的经历时使用过去时：用“couldn’t afford”，而不是“can’t afford”；“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”。避免重复“can’t afford”和“one”，并可用“so”连接原因和结果，让表达更自然。

示例: No, I didn’t. My parents couldn’t afford a bike when I was a child, so I usually took the bus to school.

建议: 明确说明自行车过去和现在的受欢迎程度，并避免把“普通自行车”和“电动自行车”混为一谈。表达过去的情况时，可以说“they were more popular five or ten years ago”；“a electronic motorbike”应改为“an electric bike”，“easily”在这里应改为“convenient”。用一个连接词说明人们选择电动自行车的原因，并避免重复使用“because”。

示例: I think traditional bikes were more popular five or ten years ago. These days, many people prefer electric bikes because they’re more convenient for commuting to work or school.

× My parents can't afford can't afford one one.

✓ My parents couldn't afford one.

这段话描述的是童年发生的事情，因此要用过去时。这里应将 can't afford 改为 couldn't afford。

× When I was child, I used to take the bus to school.

✓ When I was a child, I used to take the bus to school.

child 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。表示“小时候”时，通常说 a child。

× I think so but that's like five or ten years ago.

✓ I think so, but that was the case five or ten years ago.

five or ten years ago 指过去的时间，因此应用过去时 was，而不是现在时 is（缩写为 that's）。

× Everybody has a electronic motorbike.

✓ Everybody has an electronic motorbike.

electronic 的开头是元音音素，因此名词前应使用 an，而不是 a。

× That's like easily to go to work and go to school.

✓ It's easy to get to work and school.

这里需要用形容词 easy 描述“去上班和上学这件事很容易”，而不是用副词 easily。可以使用句型“It's + 形容词 + to do something”。