自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接，也补充了自行车的来源和原因，内容具体。注意叙述过去经历时要统一使用过去时：将“This is”改为“It was”，将“get”改为“got”。“the best grade”前可加“the”，并在“midterm exam”前加“the”或改为“a midterm exam”。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave it to me as a gift because I got the highest score on a midterm exam at elementary school.

建议: 回答了自行车在当地很受欢迎，并用台北的公共自行车作例子。建议在“for example”前后使用标点，并用“such as”或“for instance”更清楚地引出例子；“U bikes”可写作“Ubikes”或“public bike-sharing system”，且“thousands of people”后面的代词应使用复数“them”。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, Taipei has a public bike-sharing system called Ubike, and thousands of people use these bikes every day to commute or get around the city.

× This is a gift from my father because I get the best grade in midterm exam in my elementary school.

✓ This was a gift from my father because I got the best grade on the midterm exam at my elementary school.

这段话讲的是童年发生的事情，因此需要使用过去时。将“This is”改为“This was”，将“get”改为“got”，使时态与上下文一致。

× This is a gift from my father because I get the best grade in midterm exam in my elementary school.

✓ This was a gift from my father because I got the best grade on the midterm exam at my elementary school.

这里指的是特定的一次期中考试，应在“midterm exam”前加定冠词“the”。

× This is a gift from my father because I get the best grade in midterm exam in my elementary school.

✓ This was a gift from my father because I got the best grade on the midterm exam at my elementary school.

表示在考试中取得成绩时，通常用“on the exam”，而不是“in the exam”。表示在某所学校就读或发生相关事情时，此处用“at my elementary school”更合适。

× Yes, they are popular in my country for example in Taipei we have U bikes and I think thousands of people ride it every day.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country. For example, in Taipei, we have U bikes, and I think thousands of people ride them every day.

“U bikes”是复数，后面的代词应使用复数宾格“them”，不能用单数“it”。