自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用过去时描述它的颜色和用途。注意统一使用过去时，例如将“have/use”改为“had/used”；“a study”表达不清楚，可删去或改为具体活动。避免重复说“my family or parents”，并将“back”改为“bike”。结尾可说明这辆车对你的意义。

示例: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to school and to the park with my friends. It was a gift from my parents, so it was very special to me.

建议: 请围绕问题中的“bikes”作答，避免把回答重点放在“bags”上；如果“bags”“CD”是语音识别错误，练习清晰发音。先表明自行车是否受欢迎，再给出具体原因和例子。注意表达“让出行更方便”时可说“make travelling easier”，并使用自然搭配，如“ride bikes to school or to the subway”。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are affordable and make short trips much easier. For example, many students ride bikes to school, while office workers use them to get to nearby subway stations.

× Yeah, when I was a child, I have a red bike.

✓ Yeah, when I was a child, I had a red bike.

句子描述的是童年时期的情况，属于过去时间，因此应将一般现在时“have”改为一般过去时“had”。

× I use a red bike, go to school, a study or go to park with my family or parents or my friends.

✓ I used a red bike to go to school, study, or go to the park with my family, parents, or friends.

这句话承接童年经历，应使用过去时“used”，而不是现在时“use”。

× I use a red bike, go to school, a study or go to park with my family or parents or my friends.

✓ I used a red bike to go to school, study, or go to the park with my family, parents, or friends.

“a study”不能自然地与“go to school”和“go to park”并列。这里表达骑车去做某事，应使用平行结构“to go to school, study, or go to the park”。建议并列列举时保持各项结构一致。

× I use a red bike, go to school, a study or go to park with my family or parents or my friends.

✓ I used a red bike to go to school, study, or go to the park with my family, parents, or friends.

“park”是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里可说“the park”（指特定或双方都知道的公园），不能说“go to park”。

× We have a great day.

✓ We had a great day.

这句话描述的是过去发生的一天，因此应将一般现在时“have”改为一般过去时“had”。

× Well, I think bags were pretty popular in my CD because shared bags and cheap personal bags make sure the trips easy.

✓ Well, I think bags are pretty popular in my CD because shared bags and cheap personal bags make sure the trips are easy.

问题询问的是自行车在自己国家现在是否流行，因此描述当前情况应使用一般现在时“are”，而不是过去时“were”。

× Well, I think bags were pretty popular in my CD because shared bags and cheap personal bags make sure the trips easy.

✓ Well, I think bags are pretty popular in my CD because shared bags and cheap personal bags make sure the trips are easy.

“make sure”后面的“the trips easy”缺少谓语动词。应在主语“the trips”后补上系动词“are”，构成完整的从句“the trips are easy”。