自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答包含了直接回应、原因和个人经历，内容方向不错。注意说“when I was a child”，而不是“where I was a child”；表达借朋友的自行车时用“borrowed my friend's bike”。后半句有明显的表达或识别错误，请用简单、清楚的句子说明现在是否有自行车以及用途。可用“Now”连接过去和现在，并确保答案不超过五句。

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. I sometimes borrowed a friend’s bike to ride to the park. Now I own a bike and use it for short trips around my neighbourhood.

建议: 你直接回答了问题，但答案太短，而且“kubs”不是这里合适的词；如果你想说自行车，应使用“bikes”。建议补充一到两个具体理由或例子，例如自行车价格实惠、适合短途出行，或在城市中很常见。注意让补充内容与观点衔接自然。

示例: Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country. They’re an affordable way to get around, especially for short trips. You can often see people cycling to work or to nearby shops.

× No, I didn't have a bike where I was a child because my family couldn't afford one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one.

这里说的是“小时候”，需要用表示时间的连接词 when；where 表示地点，不能用于引出这个时间状语从句。