自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答“有”，再说明是谁买的以及买车的原因。注意使用过去时：把“have”改为“had”，“buy”改为“bought”；“to order to”应改为“in order to”或“so I could”。“little beg”表达不清，可以说“a small bike”。

示例: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me so I could practise riding. It was really cute, and I loved it.

建议: 开头直接回答很好，但后面的理由需要表达清楚。不要说“culture is slowly”或“life space is slowly”，可改为“people have a slower pace of life”。用“a healthy lifestyle”和“cycling is good exercise”说明原因，并用“because”或“also”连接观点。补充一个具体用途会让回答更有说服力。

示例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people enjoy cycling because it is a convenient way to get around and a good form of exercise. In smaller towns, people often use bikes to commute or run errands.

× In my childhood I have little beg is my father buy for me to order to make me exercise my cycling skills.

✓ When I was a child, I had a little bike that my father bought for me to help me practice cycling.

这句话描述的是童年发生的事情，应使用一般过去时。把“have”改为“had”，把“buy”改为“bought”。回答过去的经历时，注意将相关动词统一改为过去式。

× In my childhood I have little beg is my father buy for me to order to make me exercise my cycling skills.

✓ When I was a child, I had a little bike that my father bought for me to help me practice cycling.

“bike”是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。应说“a little bike”。遇到可数名词单数时，检查前面是否需要“a”或“the”。

× In my childhood I have little beg is my father buy for me to order to make me exercise my cycling skills.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me a little bike in order to help me practice cycling.

表示“为了……”时，固定表达是“in order to”，不能说“to order to”。建议记住“in order to + 动词原形”这一结构。

× Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because my culture is so slowly I mean it's life space is so slowly and people like healthy life and the bike could have the exercise

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because the pace of life is slow, and people like living a healthy life. Bikes also provide exercise.

“slowly”是副词，不能用来描述“culture”或“pace of life”这类名词作主语时的状态；这里需要形容词“slow”。描述事物的状态时，通常使用“be + 形容词”。

× Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because my culture is so slowly I mean it's life space is so slowly and people like healthy life and the bike could have the exercise

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because the pace of life is slow, and people like living a healthy life. Bikes also provide exercise.

“it's”是“it is”或“it has”的缩写，不能表示所属关系。原句想表达“生活的节奏”，应使用所有格“its”；也可以更自然地改写为“the pace of life”。注意区分“it's”和“its”。

× Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because my culture is so slowly I mean it's life space is so slowly and people like healthy life and the bike could have the exercise

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think bicycles are popular in my country because the pace of life is slow, and people like living a healthy life. Bikes also provide exercise.

“life”在这里是可数名词单数，表达“健康的生活”时应说“a healthy life”。“exercise”通常作为不可数名词使用，表示锻炼时一般不需要加“the”。