自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Geçmiş çocukluk deneyiminizden bahsettiğiniz için “I haven’t” yerine “I didn’t” kullanın. Tekrarlanan kelimeleri çıkarın ve neden-sonuç ilişkisini daha doğal kurun: “my parents were worried that I might have an asthma attack, so they didn’t buy me a bike.”

示例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I have asthma. My parents were worried that cycling might trigger an asthma attack, so they decided not to buy me one.

建议: Yanıtınızı doğrudan verin ve “they” gibi belirsiz zamirler yerine bisiklet kullanan kişileri açıkça belirtin. Günlük ulaşım ile spor amaçlı bisiklet kullanımını karşılaştırırken “however” veya “although” kullanabilirsiniz. “Interested with” yerine “interested in”, “the Netherlands” ifadesini kullanın.

示例: No, bikes aren’t very popular for daily transport in my country because most people use cars or public transportation. However, some people enjoy cycling for exercise. It’s not as common as it is in the Netherlands.

× No I haven't because I have asthma.

✓ No, I didn't, because I have asthma.

The question asks about a past experience and uses the past simple Did you have...? Use didn't, not haven't, to answer it. The present tense have is acceptable if you still have asthma.

× Because of that my my parents was afraid from asthma attack because of them I they didn't bought me a one.

✓ Because of that, my parents were afraid of an asthma attack, so they didn't buy me one.

Parents is plural, so it must take were, not was. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject, including in the past tense.

× Because of that my my parents was afraid from asthma attack because of them I they didn't bought me a one.

✓ Because of that, my parents were afraid of an asthma attack, so they didn't buy me one.

The adjective afraid is followed by of, not from. Learn common adjective-preposition combinations, such as afraid of and interested in.

× Because of that my my parents was afraid from asthma attack because of them I they didn't bought me a one.

✓ Because of that, my parents were afraid of an asthma attack, so they didn't buy me one.

Use an before the singular countable noun asthma attack because it begins with a vowel sound. Do not use a before one here; one already functions as a pronoun meaning a bike.

× Because of that my my parents was afraid from asthma attack because of them I they didn't bought me a one.

✓ Because of that, my parents were afraid of an asthma attack, so they didn't buy me one.

After did or didn't, use the base form of the verb: buy, not bought. The auxiliary did already marks the past tense.

× Because of that my my parents was afraid from asthma attack because of them I they didn't bought me a one.

✓ Because of that, my parents were afraid of an asthma attack, so they didn't buy me one.

The repeated pronouns them and I they make the subject unclear and redundant. Use one clear subject pronoun, they, for the people who did not buy the bike.

× No, actually in daily life they are using their own cars or transportation.

✓ No, actually, in daily life they use their own cars or other forms of transportation.

Use the simple present for a general habit or usual situation. The present continuous are using usually describes an action happening now or temporarily.

× But there are a lot of people with interested with sports because of that.

✓ However, a lot of people are interested in sports.

The correct expression is interested in. Do not put with before interested or use with instead of in.

× They are using it but not like Netherlands.

✓ They use bikes, but not as much as people do in the Netherlands.

Use the simple present, use, to describe what people generally do. The present continuous are using is not the usual choice for a general habit.

× They are using it but not like Netherlands.

✓ They use bikes, but not as much as people do in the Netherlands.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use them, or repeat bikes to make the reference clear.

× They are using it but not like Netherlands.

✓ They use bikes, but not as much as people do in the Netherlands.

The country name Netherlands is used with the definite article the. Say the Netherlands.