自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Use the past tense consistently because you are talking about childhood: say “I had,” not “I do have.” The correct verb is “riding,” not “writing.” Avoid repeating yourself, and add one specific detail, such as where you rode the bike.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was six, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

建议: Answer directly, but avoid repeating “very” and “in my country.” Support your opinion with a specific reason or example, such as people using bikes for commuting or exercise.

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. Many people use them to commute because they’re affordable and convenient.

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child and I started, I actually started writing it when I was 6.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, and I started, I actually started writing it when I was 6.

The question asks about a past time, and the clause when I was a child also establishes a past context. Use did have instead of do have. Do is present tense, while did is the correct past-tense auxiliary here.