自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 質問は過去のことを尋ねているため、「I haven't」ではなく過去形の「I didn't」を使いましょう。短い回答に理由や具体的な情報を一つ加えると、より自然で会話が広がります。

示例: No, I didn't. My family didn't own a bike, so I usually walked to school or played in the park.

建议: 「bikes」「cars」のように複数形を使い、「I think bikes are not very popular」と答えると自然です。車との比較は「whereas」などでつなぎ、車が便利な理由を具体的に説明しましょう。「transport something and you」は意味が不明確なので、「carry passengers and luggage」のように言い換えてください。また、事故について述べる場合は、文を最後まで完成させましょう。

示例: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country; cars are much more common. This is partly because people can carry passengers and luggage more easily by car. Also, many people feel safer driving than cycling on busy roads.

× No, I haven't.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question uses the past simple tense: Did you have...? The short answer should use did, not have. Use No, I didn't. to answer negatively.

× I think bike is not popular.

✓ I think bikes are not popular.

When referring to bikes in general, use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject also requires the verb are. Use a plural noun when making a general statement about a category.

× The car is more popular than bike.

✓ Cars are more popular than bikes.

The sentence compares cars and bikes in general, so use plural nouns for both. Make sure the verb agrees with the plural subject: cars are.

× We can, we can, transport something and you by using car.

✓ We can transport things by car.

The original clause shifts from we to you and leaves the phrase and you by using car without a complete grammatical structure. Keep the subject consistent and use a complete clause. By car is the natural expression for describing a means of transportation.

× The car is safer than the bike and the, the number of accidents.

✓ Cars are safer than bikes, and there are fewer accidents.

The sentence ends with the number of accidents, which is an incomplete phrase and does not express a complete idea. Complete the thought with a clause such as there are fewer accidents. Use plural nouns when speaking about cars and bikes in general.