自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer the question directly, then explain how your bike changed as you grew older. Use past-tense forms consistently ("got," "had," "took off") and avoid fillers such as "like" and unclear phrases such as "biking sections." Keep the answer concise and use specific details.

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My first one had training wheels, and I got a bigger bike when I learned to ride. After a while, I took the training wheels off and was able to ride on my own.

建议: State your opinion clearly and use correct subject–verb agreement ("bikes are") and plural nouns ("motorcycles"). Explain the connection between limited cycling infrastructure and people's transport choices with a linking word such as "because" or "as a result." Use the natural phrase "bike lanes" or "cycle paths" instead of "bike road."

示例: I don't think bikes are very popular in Bangkok. Most people rely on cars or motorcycles because there aren't many bike lanes, which makes cycling around the city difficult. As a result, bikes are used more for exercise or short trips than for everyday transport.

× My first bike is like four wheels bike.

✓ My first bike was like a bike with four wheels.

The student is describing a childhood bike, so the past-tense form was is needed instead of the present-tense form is. Use the past tense when describing something that was true in the past.

× My first bike is like four wheels bike.

✓ My first bike was like a bike with four wheels.

The singular count noun bike needs an article. Use a before a singular count noun when referring to it generally.

× but when times go on I got my wheels off and I begin my own biking sections like something like that.

✓ But as time went on, I got my wheels off and began biking on my own, something like that.

The student is recounting a past experience, so went and began are appropriate past-tense forms. Keep the verbs in the same tense when describing events in a past sequence.

× but when times go on I got my wheels off and I begin my own biking sections like something like that.

✓ But as time went on, I got my wheels off and began biking on my own, something like that.

In the expression as time went on, time is an uncountable noun and is not made plural. Use time, not times, in this expression.

× I don't think that bikes is really popular in my country that much.

✓ I don't think that bikes are that popular in my country.

Bikes is plural, so it must take the plural verb are, not is. Make sure the verb agrees with its subject in number.

× Most people are using cars and motorcycle more

✓ Most people use cars and motorcycles more.

This describes a general habit, so the simple present use is more appropriate than the present progressive are using. Use the present simple for regular or usual behavior.

× Most people are using cars and motorcycle more

✓ Most people use cars and motorcycles more.

Cars is plural, so the other countable vehicle in this comparison should also be plural: motorcycles. Use a plural noun when referring to vehicles in general.

× because there's no bike road in Bangkok so it's hard to ride it around and using them properly.

✓ Because there's no bike road in Bangkok, it's hard to ride bikes around and use them properly.

Because and so should not be used together to connect the same cause and result in this sentence. Keep because and remove so, or use so without because.

× it's hard to ride it around and using them properly.

✓ It's hard to ride bikes around and use them properly.

The pronoun it is singular, but them is plural. Since the sentence refers to bikes generally, use the plural pronoun them consistently.

× it's hard to ride it around and using them properly.

✓ It's hard to ride bikes around and use them properly.

The verbs coordinated after hard to should have parallel forms: to ride and to use. Do not switch to using in this construction.