自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再用一两句补充学骑车的经历。注意使用过去时：learn 应改为 learned，it don't spend me 应改为 it didn’t take me。避免重复表达“很快学会”，可补充一个具体细节，例如在哪里学会的。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it quite quickly, so it didn’t take me long to feel confident. I used to practise in the quiet street near my home.

建议: 开头直接回答“很受欢迎”，然后说明原因并举一个具体例子。注意把 take up bikes 改为 ride bikes，把 go to their works 改为 go to work，并使用 shared bikes（共享单车）。删去重复的 you can 和口头填充语 you know；句子之间可用 because、for example 等连接词。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people ride them to work or school because they’re convenient for short trips. For example, shared bikes are easy to find near bus and subway stations.

× When I was a child, I had a bike and I learn it.

✓ When I was a child, I had a bike and I learned how to ride it.

整句话描述的是童年时发生的事情，应使用过去时。learn 的过去式是 learned。这里用 learned how to ride it 能更清楚地表达“学会骑车”。

× It don't spend me a lot of time to learn how to ride a bike and I soon learn it.

✓ It didn't take me a lot of time to learn how to ride a bike, and I soon learned how to ride it.

句子描述过去的经历，因此要用过去时：don't 应改为 didn't，learn 应改为 learned。

× It don't spend me a lot of time to learn how to ride a bike and I soon learn it.

✓ It didn't take me a lot of time to learn how to ride a bike, and I soon learned how to ride it.

英语中表达“做某事花某人一段时间”通常使用“It takes/took someone some time to do something”，不能说“spend me time”。可使用“It didn't take me a lot of time...”这一结构。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because many people have their bikes and they take up bikes, they go to their works or go to schools.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people have their bikes and they take up bikes; they go to work or school.

表示去上班或上学时，通常说“go to work”或“go to school”，work 和 school 在这里不使用复数形式。

× I think bikes are popular in my country because many people have their bikes and they take up bikes, they go to their works or go to schools.

✓ I think bikes are popular in my country because many people have their bikes and they take up bikes; they go to work or school.

逗号不能直接连接两个完整的独立分句，否则会形成逗号拼接错误。这里可用分号分隔两个分句，或使用合适的连词连接。