自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答切题，但存在较多语法错误、重复和表达不清。讲过去的经历时要用过去时，例如“had”和“liked”；“when I was child”应改为“when I was a child”。可以说明妈妈为什么买自行车，以及你如何和朋友一起骑车。删去重复的“I like it very much”和含义不清的“play chess”，让答案控制在几句内并保持连贯。

示例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me because I really liked riding it. I often rode it with my friends after school.

建议: 你直接表达了观点，也给出了交通拥堵这一相关原因。注意主谓一致：“bikes”是复数，应说“bikes are”；避免重复“go to go”，并把“go house”改成“get around”或“travel to work and school”。还可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车方便短途出行或避开堵车。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. Traffic can be very heavy, so cycling is a convenient way to get around. Many people ride bikes to work or school, particularly for short journeys.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

child 是单数可数名词，前面通常需要限定词。这里应加不定冠词 a。

× I have bike.

✓ I had a bike.

问题询问的是童年经历，叙述过去的情况时，have 应使用过去式 had。句中还缺少冠词 a；此处也已在修改句中补上。

× because I very like it very much

✓ because I really liked it very much

very 通常不能直接修饰动词 like。要表达“非常喜欢”，可以用 really like，或用 like something very much。修改后的 liked 也与童年经历的过去时间一致。

× I like it very much 'cause I have some chance to. I can play with my friends.

✓ I liked it very much because I had the chance to play with my friends.

这里谈的是小时候的经历，因此 like、have 和 can 应根据语境改为过去形式 liked、had 和 could。原句中的 to 后面缺少动词，修改后补出 play，并将意思连成完整句子。

× Yes, yes, play chess.

✓ Yes, I played chess.

原句只有 play chess 这个动词短语，没有明确的主语和完整谓语结构。可以补上主语 I，并用过去式 played 来描述童年经历。

× I think it's popular in my country.

✓ I think they are popular in my country.

这里谈论的是复数名词 bikes，因此用 it 指代不恰当。应使用复数代词 they，并搭配 are。

× Many people think bikes is a great way to go to go house, go home and go to school.

✓ Many people think bikes are a great way to get home and go to school.

主语 bikes 是复数，因此 be 动词应使用 are，而不是 is。