自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答问题，再用过去时说明你小时候有什么类型的自行车。注意“foldable bag”是“可折叠的包”，这里应说“folding bike”或“foldable bike”；“I have I had”应改为“I had”。最后一句没有说完，避免用“And”结束答案，可以补充一个完整的感受或原因。

示例: Yes, I did. I had a folding bike when I was a child. I loved riding it along the river near my apartment because the scenery was beautiful and the ride was relaxing.

建议: 你的回答有比较电动自行车和普通自行车的想法，但“electronic bike”更自然的说法是“electric bike”，“not such popular”应改为“not as popular”。请明确说明共享单车与普通自行车受欢迎程度之间的关系，并用“while”或“because”等连接词让比较更清楚。注意使用复数或一般现在时描述普遍情况。

示例: It depends on the type of bike. Electric bikes are very popular in my country, especially among people who commute to work. Traditional bikes seem less popular in some cities because shared bikes are easy to find and convenient to use.

× Yeah, I have I had a foldable bag when I was a kid.

✓ Yeah, I had a foldable bag when I was a kid.

“When I was a kid”指过去的时间，因此应使用过去时“had”。“I have I had”包含了重复且时态不一致的动词，删除“I have”即可。

× I think the electronic bike was very popular in my country but for the normal bike. I think it's not such popular, especially where we have a shared bike.

✓ I think electric bikes are very popular in my country, but regular bikes are not so popular, especially where we have shared bikes.

这里是在泛指电动自行车和普通自行车，应使用复数“bikes”，并相应使用“are”。泛指共享单车时也可用复数“shared bikes”。修改时保留了原句表达的意思。

× I think it's not such popular, especially where we have a shared bike.

✓ I think they're not so popular, especially where we have shared bikes.

“popular”是形容词，前面应使用“so”表示“如此”，不能使用“such”。“such”通常修饰名词短语，例如“such a popular bike”。此外，此处泛指普通自行车，使用复数代词“they”与“bikes”保持一致。