自行车— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
考生
Yes I did. It was a bright orange bike that I used to ride with my friends whenever we were free and it had a distinctive eye kitchen view which always made me stand out in the group. I remember taking great care of it, cleaning it every weekend so it would stay shiny and look new.
考官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
考生
Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country. When I go to the park I often see many people riding bikes and the government has introduced a public bike sharing scheme and improved cycling dance to encourage cycling because it is healthy and environmentally friendly.
评估
总分
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
分数: 72.0建议: 回答直接，细节也比较具体，例如自行车的颜色、和朋友骑车以及每周清洁。不过，“a distinctive eye kitchen view”表达不自然，可能是想说“a distinctive, eye-catching design”。建议先用简短句子介绍自行车，再补充一个回忆；注意句子之间用标点分开，避免信息堆在同一句里。
示例: Yes, I did. I had a bright orange bike with a distinctive, eye-catching design, so it was easy to spot in a group. I often rode it with my friends in our free time, and I used to clean it every weekend to keep it shiny.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
分数: 74.0建议: 回答切题，也提到了公园里的观察、共享单车政策以及骑车的益处，内容较充实。建议把较长的第二句拆开，并将“cycling dance”改为更合适的表达，如“cycling lanes”或“cycling infrastructure”。可以用“also”和“because”连接观点与理由，使表达更清晰自然。
示例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. I often see people cycling in parks, and many cities have introduced bike-sharing schemes. The government has also improved cycling infrastructure, such as adding more bike lanes, because cycling is healthy and environmentally friendly.
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