自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你直接回答了问题，也补充了年龄和感受，结构基本清楚。不过，“car bike”表达不自然；如果你指的是自行车，可以说“a brand-new bike”。另外，“When I was six years old, I got...”比“bought”更合适，除非你想强调是自己买的。可以再补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色或你骑车时做的事情。

示例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was six. It was brand-new and bright red, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood.

建议: 你有直接回答问题，并尝试用街上的景象解释原因，这是不错的思路。但“Yeah”重复太多，显得不够自然；“many people like ride”语法错误，应改为“many people riding bikes”或“many people like riding bikes”。“everywhere”也比较笼统，可以举出通勤或短途出行等具体场景，并用“because”连接理由。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. You can often see people riding them on city streets, especially during rush hour. Many people use bikes for short trips because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× It's very popular in my country.

✓ They are very popular in my country.

这里的“They”指前文复数名词“bikes”，不能用单数代词“It”。代词要与所指对象的单复数保持一致，因此应使用“They are”。

× When you walk on the streets you can see many people like ride a bike everywhere.

✓ When you walk on the streets, you can see many people riding bikes everywhere.

表示“看到某人正在做某事”时，常用“see + 人 + 动词-ing”结构，因此应将“like ride”改为“riding”。这里的“like”不能放在“see many people”之后表达正在观察到的动作。