自行车— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 先直接回答是否有自行车，例如“Yes, I did.”。“I have tried”和“I have a boy”与问题不符或意思不清，应删去。讲童年经历时使用一般过去时，并注意搭配：说“my mum bought it for me”，而不是“bought it to me”。最后可以补充一个具体活动，让回答更自然。

示例: Yes, I did. My mum bought me a bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends after school.

建议: 先明确回答自行车是否受欢迎，再用一两个清楚的理由展开。将“tools of transport”换成更自然的“a convenient/affordable way to get around”，并使用复数“trips”。“walking can be tiring”比“walking can be tired”正确；最后的“taking tests”与交通语境不符，如果想表达“打车”，应说“taking a taxi”。避免把多个理由塞进一个句子，可用“Also”连接补充信息。

示例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re a convenient and affordable way to travel short distances, such as two or three kilometres. They can also save time compared with walking, especially when people are in a hurry.

× Yes, I have tried.

✓ Yes, I did.

问题问的是童年时是否有自行车，指的是已经结束的过去时间。这里用现在完成时“have tried”不合适；用一般过去时“Yes, I did”来回答更恰当。

× When I was a child I remember that my mom bought it to me.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that my mom bought it for me.

表示“为某人买某物”时，应该使用“buy something for someone”，而不是“buy something to someone”。

× Yes, because they are good tools of transport, especially for some middle distance trip like 3, two or three kilometers.

✓ Yes, because they are good tools of transport, especially for some middle-distance trips of around two or three kilometers.

“some”后面表示可数事物时通常需要使用复数名词，因此应将单数“trip”改为“trips”。

× While walking can be really time consuming and tired.

✓ While walking can be really time-consuming and tiring.

“tired”表示人的感受，即“感到疲倦的”；这里描述步行令人疲倦，应使用“-ing”形式的形容词“tiring”。